*Passes out*
HELL yeah that was useful!!!!
*Is still blown away by just how useful that critique was*
Lol, I should've known the prose writers would've come a knockin', and thank you so much for the amazing insight you gave me!
*Ranks it in the top five comments of all time*
I see what you mean about 'tall' vocabulary and that's something I'm definitely going to keep in mind... the prose I wrote for 'Touch' was a one off thing, but it would've been an easy trap to emulate it in something longer so I really appreciate the head's up! ^___^ Lol, I blame it on all the silly essays I wrote last semester... damn long words.
*Shoots the essays*
I'm planning to make a few more prose/pics later down the track in the same style as 'Touch,' although I have little scatterings of prose lying around on my comp that aren't related to anything.
Maybe I'll try to link them up with pics so that they can actually be useful.
Anyhoo, I'm honoured to have been critiqued by an accomplished prose writer like yourself, and thankyou so much for reading!
*Wonders how many people got through the whole thing*
I'll catch you later dear!
*Offers you
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